KryptopsWhat I liked:
Kryptops is a real bastard. Kissing and caressing her while she was down, basically openly mocking her the ENTIRE fight, this is a heelish heel-y heel heel. He flips that switch and goes from bastard to ass-kicker immediately, and that was shown a few times here too. Not many true heelish heels like this in XWA right now so you really stand out.What I disliked:
I felt like this was a dressed up squash match, to be honest. From the opening bell, Kryptops beat her pillar to post, with her getting in a little by way of offense. I understand that Kryptops is a scary heel and she's the bubbly face and that 3k words is pretty limiting, but honestly he's not that much bigger than she is, so I feel like she could've gotten a lot more in than she did.Personal Favourite Part:
The disrespectful maneuver garners a heavy wave of boos. Unaffected by the fans' reaction, Kryptops licks his lips and steps around his foe in almost a pleased demeanor. Angelica rolls in place, her hands reaching up and cupping the back of her head in an attempt to soothe away the throbbing pain. Standing proudly over top of the Vaughnemous One, Kryptops pulls both of his arms up into a a double bicep flex pose whilst letting out a roar, leaving a taste of disgust in every man, woman and child in the arena. The sound of jeers seemingly brings joy to the Mastermind of the New World Order. He lowers his arms, lets out a chuckle and drops to his knees beside his female counterpart. Mockingly, Kryptops takes his hand and rubs Ang's cheek with the stroke of his thumb as if to soothe and console the downed female. Continuing to add insult to injury, Kryptops leans over, places his lips on Vaughn and plants a kiss on her forehead, an action that earns the former champion even more jeers. Just as soon as he was to kiss his wounded opponent the maniac flips a switch and begins to bludgeon Vaughn's forehead with a barrage of closed-hand strikes, using his top two knuckles to dig into the reddening flesh of the Canadian. Having no tolerance for illegal strikes, the brazen official swoops down and hooks his arm around Kryptops', promptly putting an end to the lawless strikes.
My GOD is Kryptops a bastard. I love it.Personal Least Favourite Part:
Vaughn ricochets off the middle turnbuckle, her eyes rolls behind her head and she falls back against the mat, motionless. Kryptops smoothly rolls to his knees, his trademarked smirk etched sadistically across his face as he looks down at poor-little Angelica. Like a snake, after it has injected venom and stalked it's prey, slithers over to his adversary. The bully of a man covers Vaughn, reinforcing the pinfall by reaching over and pinning her hand down to the mat with his left hand. The ref, hoping to put an end to young Angelica's misery swoops down and begins pounding away at the canvas.
Like a slimy piece of human garbage, Kryptops willingly pulls Angelica's hand off the mat with a devilish smile and puts a halt to the three count.
I feel like this should've either been the end or never happened, cos this was where I started feeling like she was just a body for Kryptops to beat up. It just makes her look very weak in my opinion.Constructive Criticism for Next Time:
I feel like this match was pretty good, just needed a little more evenness in the offense. Even if Kryptops was going to dominate, she really needs to put him in peril at least a few times. She really only got like 2 real spots and the one near fall she was launched off of him.Final Comments:
-------Angelica VaughnWhat I liked:
Angelica Vaughn bleeds in one of her first matches. Not many people would do that. The mind games she tries to play at the beginning were pretty funny, and that Kryptops wasn't fooled by it was awesome.What I disliked:
Honestly, not much. The only thing that really bothered me was there were a bunch of misspelled words, but nothing spell-check can't fix.Personal Favourite Part:
Kryptops doesn’t let the kickout discourage him. He grabs hold of Angelica’s head, and with his free elbow takes aim at her forehead. He smashes it in, hitting for the weakest spots, making sure to wait just long enough before hitting her with another. Like a quartermaster whipping a disobedient deck hands, he metes out the punishment with cruel and calculating precision, maximizing the impact and the pain each strike brings. Angelica shrieks each time his elbow connects with the skin on her forehead, until eventually it breaks, drawing first blood.
“Oh no, he busted her open! That vicious bastard didn’t stop until he tore open her skin! I’m… sorry, ladies and gentlemen for my unprofessional outburst. But this is simply uncalled for!”
Kryptops laughs as he laps up the blood starting to trickle from the wound with his hand and starts to smear it across her face.
“Now he’s painting her a crimson mask! Is this… legal?”
“Apparently so, since the referee seems powerless to stop it, but he sure has crossed the boundaries of basic human decency and sportsmanship long ago! I know this is a combat sport, injuries happen, etcetera… but this? This is never okay? Not when he takes such PLEASURE from it!”
Angelica squeaks like a faulty toy, but the crowd once again start to rally her, chanting her name and clapping in their hands. Eventually, the thunderous boos make way for positive encouragement and as Kryptops seems distracted by his own crimson handiwork of sanguine, Angelica dishes out a few well-aimed elbows of her own, directed at his gut.
That understanding of how much of a bastard Kryptops is paired with how innocent Angelica is, and then having him being even nastier by licking it up and smearing it on her. Well written, well executed.Personal Least Favourite Part:
No, I won't give in
I won’t give in
'till I'm victorious
and I will defend
I will defend
And I'll do what I must
No, I won't give in
I won’t give in
Oh, so #Vaughnemous
Until the end
Until the end
I hate your entrance music. That's a "me" problem though.Constructive Criticism for Next Time:
Keep it up, I think you could be a champion around here.Final Comments:
----The Person Getting My VOTE:
Angelica VaughnOverall Match Comments: