you improve more and more every time I read your stuff, genuinely. I mentioned recently the gifs, and how they should act only as exclamation points for the BIG moves. What I like here is that you described the moves before using them, sometimes so well that you didn't even need them. I knew exactly what I'd just seen. I say that to good I found them a little unnecessary here. I'm usually the gif guy myself but recently even I'm curbing it. Sometimes the writing its self is all you need, it's powerful enough and if you've got a great gif of the move you find yourself rushing the paragraph to get to the gif.
As always your action was good. Your matches are very indy-style in that I wouldn't ever expect to see them on Raw or anything. They're very spot-heavy and that's not necessarily a bad thing and I think you put over Tim as a sneaky heel really well. Commentary was very good. I really like the underdog-ness of Austin. It's been a while since we've had a character like him here, he's a very easy character to like. I will admit I got a tad confused after finish. Did the try to give the belt to Tim despite him not being the victor? I found it a bit hard to understand, maybe I need to read it again. Good stuff- you're taking on board feedback and it shows in a good way. Oh also one last thing- I like the LARGE SIZED WORDS for pin attempts and other spots. Keep that!
This was what I've basically come to expect from you. First of all... Lx-Tim is such a git. Like he won an award for it but i wanna reiterate that I just love how fucking heelish and cocky he is. He's so up his own arse it's perfect and once again you proved that here. This match worked because of it and because he had a genuine babyface to highlight that. I feel Tim works best when he has a good face to fuck over and Carter was perfect for that. You also made him look like a million dollars here. An actual underdog hero who, on a different day where Tim had no help, could've won it all. The duplexes, the Lynx elimination, all of it. This made me want a rematch to see Austin get his comeuppance but I guess I'm getting that on Massacre!
One thing I enjoy about your work is your attention to detail. You're the subtle-things writer around here and you come up with stuff just no one else would even bother putting in. Tim's shouting and comments really sell that. Your formatting makes for easy reading, pacing is good, and the match was fun.
I'm gonna give this to Tim. As much as I love the underdog getting a win, I enjoyed Tim's match more but I wanna see Austin and Tim go to hell and back in the rematch.
Brilliant work from both of you.