Feedback: Malignancies

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Declan
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Feedback: Malignancies

Postby Declan » Mon Apr 06, 2015 1:26 am

Just want to know what people think, since Declan failed to win his last match.
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Re: Feedback: Malignancies

Postby Razer » Tue Apr 07, 2015 12:19 am

Generally its frowned upon to go on about the wrestling is staged thing when you're on screen, so that didn't look right.

Nor did just glossing over the fact you lost to two champions. Even if it may be in your characters nature to not acknowledge them or the defeats in detail and admit they were better, it does help to at least give more than a sentence in reference to them.

It just felt like a paint-by-numbers promo to me.
Declan complains about something, namedrops his partner who can't get a match, ignores his past opponents and upcoming one and makes a bold statement which in the past few matches, has usually came back on him.
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