Feedback: Tie Breaker

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Koro Sensei
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Feedback: Tie Breaker

Postby Koro Sensei » Sat Apr 20, 2019 6:17 am

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Re: Feedback: Tie Breaker

Postby RufusMGS » Sun Apr 21, 2019 8:53 am

Simple, to the point promo that kept me engaged from start to finish. Sean, charismatic as ever, recapping the events that led to his return gave me all the information I needed to understand this long-ass rivalry without feeling too expository. That was probably my favorite part of the promo because of how difficult it should be to recap things in a satisfying manner without it going on and on due to the very eventful history behind the Sean/Danny feud. I loved the idea of this match as well. Instead of just doing the same thing again, you guys decided to tell a different story with these two and it paid off. Great work! I can't wait to see where it goes in the actual match and how the "this is all about proving who the better wrestler is" angle pays off for the match's storytelling.
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