Feedback: Stepping Forward

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GiggityGopher
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Feedback: Stepping Forward

Postby GiggityGopher » Thu Dec 06, 2018 3:45 pm

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I haven't really done much off-screen character development for Danny. Or most of my characters, in general.
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Re: Feedback: Stepping Forward

Postby Rob Chapman » Tue Dec 11, 2018 12:53 am

Excellent work. I was absolutely not expecting this to go in the direction it did... this was an exceptionally well written, albeit, unsettling piece from you, and will be important to keep in mind moving forward for Danny. But I can't wait to see what this leads to in the new year. Hopefully this gets some other comments because it's a hell of a twist.
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