Feedback: Massacre 37 - Dream

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Koro Sensei
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Feedback: Massacre 37 - Dream

Postby Koro Sensei » Fri Oct 05, 2018 7:37 am

http://www.xwabattlezone.com/XWA/viewtopic.php?f=9&t=8401

Aye...no spoilers doe? Go read the shiz. Tell the world how you feel.
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Re: Feedback: Massacre 37 - Dream

Postby Rob Chapman » Fri Oct 05, 2018 2:59 pm

Yo... I just...

I wanted to leave a detailed comment on this, and try to weave around the 'no spoilers' request, but, like... I have no words. Y'all better bring your fucking A-games because I am hype as fuck for this feud. LEGENDS can't come soon enough.

If I can critique only one thing, Brandon, it's that if you're gonna take things to a level this serious, proof read a little more. This is the kind of good that I got so into that spelling mistakes threw me out of it because I didn't feel like I was just reading a promo. This felt like a genuine moment that shocked me.
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Re: Feedback: Massacre 37 - Dream

Postby RufusMGS » Thu Oct 25, 2018 9:48 am

11/10. I loved it. Danny Diamond comes back in a big way and Sean's dialogue is top tier as it always is. I genuinely can't wait to see what you guys do at Legends and I'd love to see at least one more promo to flesh out the history behind Mirage.

Speaking of Mirage: R.I.P.
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