Feedback: Matriarch

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RufusMGS
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Feedback: Matriarch

Postby RufusMGS » Thu Jul 05, 2018 11:43 pm

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Give me feedback, plz <3
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Re: Feedback: Matriarch

Postby GiggityGopher » Thu Jul 05, 2018 11:59 pm

Fucking Yakuza ass Yakuza.

Enjoyed this a lot. Kaida openly being like "Yeah, I'm a Yakuza family leader" because she gives an astounding zero fucks was great. I really like this thing she's got with Emery, beginning in your match on the last show, and I'm interested to see where that goes. And bringing up IYH's fairly dominant showing against XWA was cool.

Also, I was struggling a bit with how to make Kaida appear more heel in a match against Jerod, given that he's a giant heel, but this helped. About to be piece of shit vs. piece of shit.
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Re: Feedback: Matriarch

Postby Koro Sensei » Fri Jul 06, 2018 8:00 am

Jeeeeezuz!

I’m finally getting around to reading stuff posted here. Really trying to get back into the efed mindset....and just jeeeeezuz.

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