Feedback: The History Lesson

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Feedback: The History Lesson

Postby GiggityGopher » Tue Jun 12, 2018 10:05 am

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This was my first solo Jerod Barnez promo in a little while now, so I'd like to get any feedback people have on it. I do gotta say I've missed using him.
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Re: Feedback: The History Lesson

Postby Myke » Sun Jun 17, 2018 3:47 pm

Feedback about the format: the text is a little hard to read because of the background of the site (I'm new, can I change it?) but the red and italics don't really work.

Feedback about the actual promo: I enjoyed it. It served as a literal history lesson and I felt it was told well, especially coming from a face-perspective. The final line was also well done and helped build more for the tournament. So good job.
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