Feedback: Are You Paranoid?

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Feedback: Are You Paranoid?

Postby RevolutionJones » Sun Apr 01, 2018 10:33 pm

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Figured I'd do a little something to help flesh out the story behind my match submission for On A Pole, as well as introduce one of my non-XWA characters to our strange little corner of the universe. How'd I do?
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Re: Feedback: Are You Paranoid?

Postby Dan » Sun Apr 01, 2018 10:55 pm

Excellent work. Plus, you've given me plenty to dig into promowise next show, regardless of who wins.
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Re: Feedback: Are You Paranoid?

Postby RevolutionJones » Mon Apr 02, 2018 12:35 am

Honestly, Dan, I can't thank you enough for the segment you posted earlier in the cycle. That really was the spark for the story in both this promo and the match I sent in.
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Re: Feedback: Are You Paranoid?

Postby Dan » Mon Apr 02, 2018 1:16 am

RevolutionJones wrote:Honestly, Dan, I can't thank you enough for the segment you posted earlier in the cycle. That really was the spark for the story in both this promo and the match I sent in.



Legit, it's not the first time Dan Bennett has shat on a "lesser" title. I figured consistency is key lol
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